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This is my first foray into the {W}rite of Passage! So excited to find ways to improve my writing. http://geishaschooldropout.typepad.com/geisha_school_dropout/2010/02/in-my-bedroom.html
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February 8, 2010 to February 13, 2010
The writer is the person who is standing apart. - Page 97 Bird by Bird. "Think of those times when you've read prose or poetry that is presented in such a way that you have a fleeting sense of being startled by beauty or insight, by a glimpse into…
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Here's mine as well: Scramble. I have to say, I've been pretty disappointed that no one is even commenting on the posts anymore, it seems. I hope people are just busy and this isn't a trend :/
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I'm not sure if I did this right, but here goes. http://fearandparenting.wordpress.com/2010/02/08/sarcasm-and-salt/
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I'm not sure if I did this right, but here goes... http://fearandparenting.wordpress.com/2010/02/08/sarcasm-and-salt/
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http://elizabethsheryl.blogspot.com -- a small, little entry..dipping my toes back in with my blog, going through a divorce/moving states made things a bit deserted. But I'll still take some critique. :p
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Mrs. Flinger

Critique Me! Challenge #9 - Looking Around 6 Replies

The writer is the person who is standing apart. - Page 97 Bird by Bird. "Think of those times when you've read prose or poetry that is presented in such a way that you have a fleeting sense of being…

Tagged: writers, skill, writing, written

Started by Mrs. Flinger. Last reply by Julie Kang 8 minutes ago.

Mrs. Flinger

Critique Me! Challenge #8 - Plot 25 Replies

Page 55 of Bird by Bird, "All you can give us is what life is about from your point of view." Plot is the main point of your story. Every blog post is a story, however short or long you create it. W…

Started by Mrs. Flinger. Last reply by Angela D. Glascock Feb 5.

Mrs. Flinger

Critique Me! Challenge #7- Dialog 80 Replies

"Good dialogue is such a pleasure to come across while reading, a complete change of pace from description and exposition and all that writing." - page 64 Bird by Bird Today post a dialog between ch…

Tagged: writers, skill, writing, written

Started by Mrs. Flinger. Last reply by KristinaBrooke (Mom on the Rise) Jan 31.

Mrs. Flinger

Critique Me! Challenge #5 - The Job 59 Replies

"Re-create for us your first job, your first "real" job, your last job. Tell us details about your first day, or last day. Not generalities like, "My boss sucked" because we've all learned from Dooce…

Started by Mrs. Flinger. Last reply by KristinaBrooke (Mom on the Rise) Jan 27.

Blog Posts

Debby Carroll

Look Around You Challenge

The writing challenge is to be in the space I occupy day after day and write about what I see while trying to find something positive in it. The space between myself and the window to my right is what I see
more than anything. Well, that's not true. First I see my screen, the
blank slate that beckons me, teases me, calls me, and receives whatever
I put out there. My screen, large enough for my "experienced" (read:
much nicer adjective than old) eyes to see, reminds me of the universe
in a way

Continue

Posted by Debby Carroll on February 8, 2010 at 12:31pm

Angela D. Glascock

The Point I'm Trying to Make * {W}rite of Passage * Challenge #8

Secrets and Lies

In May of 1996, or maybe at that point it was June, someone advised my mom to put in my sister’s obituary that she died of an aneurysm instead of telling the truth, which was that she chose to die.

My mom, confounded and not wanting to discuss my sister’s death with anyone, agreed to this story and instructed me not to tell anyone. Well, I had already told people. And people find things out. But then I was expected to start lying. Now, I don’t think anyone really though… Continue

Posted by Angela D. Glascock on February 2, 2010 at 2:30pm

Mrs. Flinger

Would you like to help out?

Looking for a great team of people who can help me welcome new members, give critique in a positive manor and get people on board. If you have ideas for a theme or would like to help out, please let me know!


Thank you, as a full time working mother of two busy little people who is losing her sanity slowly,

Mrs. Flinger
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Posted by Mrs. Flinger on February 2, 2010 at 11:51am

bubbleboo

Agnes

It was a little after 7am when I reached her room. I knew she would be awake – she probably had been for a while now. I tapped gently on the door, and entered the room.

“Good morning, Agnes”.

“Good morning, dear,” she smiled at me. “What’s your name?”

“It’s me, Agnes – Martha,” I reminded her gently.

“Oh yes, of course…” I could see the look of confusion on her face. The struggle behind her pale blue eyes as she tried to remember who I was.

“How did you sleep, Agnes?” I asked her, keeping m… Continue

Posted by bubbleboo on January 30, 2010 at 12:29pm

 
 
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